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PostSubject: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Wed Sep 10, 2014 6:32 am

Hiya, I'm bored and I like writing poetry and want to share it with people who will not think I am crazy for writing it the way I do. You can post poems that you've written yourself, found in books, on the internet or somewhere that you liked and share them, or just read. I doubt I will get any views on here but oh well. Hopefully someone will find it interesting. I will post poems that I have written myself. Warning: they can be dark and goryish. Sorry just they way I write. If you feel like you want to use my poems or someone else's for something please make sure you ask them or me for permission. Sorry this is so long. I tend to ramble. Have fun! SmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile (I like smileys)
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Wed Sep 10, 2014 6:40 am

My most recent poem so far. I just wrote it today.
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Black thorns pierce through the heart,
Sharp words cut the spirit,
Judgemental eyes wound the soul,
Quick hands break the shell,
Whispers of murder and death,
Crowding the dark corners.

The day will come,
When all who offend,
Will perish.

In torturous pain,
They will suffer in despair,
For all eternity.

Never.

Ending.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Wed Sep 10, 2014 6:42 am

Silence surrounds,
Unknown sounds,
Plague our dreams,
Tearing apart,
Our dark hearts.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Wed Sep 10, 2014 6:43 am

Dark petals fall to the ground,
Faces fall with sadness,
Tears fall with pain,
Knives fall with force,
Blood falls with grace.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Wed Sep 10, 2014 6:47 am

The wind is howling.
My heart is screaming.
Never-ending is the pounding in my head.
Silence does not exist.
Torture from the voices is endless.
Going on,
Forever.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Wed Sep 10, 2014 6:49 am

Whispers in the dark.

My head is spinning.

The never-ending yells.

I cannot resist Them.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Wed Sep 10, 2014 6:50 am

Shadows crowd around;
Darkness drips down;
Blood swirls away;
Life leaks absent.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Wed Sep 10, 2014 6:55 am

Words swirl around like a tornado,
Behind my back and straight to my face,
No one understands,
No one really knows me.

Inspiration is all around me,
My eyes take it all in,
Everything,
Especially the people.

They think they're angels from heaven,
But in reality,
They're demons from Hell.

My mouth stays shut for a reason,
If I were to open it,
People would shun me for all the wisdom.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Wed Sep 10, 2014 7:29 am

The world spins,
People move,
Everything blurs around me,
And I'm standing still.

Stares and insults ground into me,
Deeply.
Sometimes I wish I never lived,
Or I had the power of invisibility.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Wed Sep 10, 2014 7:34 am

Lightning flashes,
Thunder crashes,
Rain cascades down from the sky.

Shivering in fear,
Shrouded in darkness,
Waiting for it to be over.

Blinded by the light,
Deafened by the rumble,
Strangled by the shadow.

Fading away,
Escaping from fear,
Loneliness,
Sadness,
And Regret.

Drifting apart,
Leaving my body,
No longer tethered.

Free.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Wed Sep 10, 2014 7:39 am

Falling through barriers,
Missing warning signs,
Slipping on lies,
Tripping over hate.

Endless darkness,
Eternally blind,
Nothing to do,
Nowhere to go,
But INSANE.

Eating from the inside out,
A caged animal,
Clawing me to pieces,
Unable to escape.

Losing myself,
Farther and farther I drift,
My grip is failing,
Swirling into the unknown,
Forever.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Wed Sep 10, 2014 7:49 am

Silent tears role down my cheeks,
Part of me dies.

Gone to a world, that only I can know,
A sadness fills me so deep, it hurts.

The bond that's broken,
Can never be mended.

Never again,
Will either of us understand each other.

Life begins to seem shallow,
As we slowly start to lose ourselves.

Overwwhelmed with what we once knew,
And overwhelmed the we will never know it again.

I only hope they know, I will never, forget Them.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Wed Sep 10, 2014 7:54 am

Hope
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No matter how dark, confusing, and unclear your path may be, never give up on the light that shines at the end of it. That light is called Hope. Hope is like the single star tjat shines on a cloudy night, or the first bud that appears on a tree in spring. Keep reaching for it, looking for it, because Hope is not earned, it's found.
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This is by far the best and only poem that is not dark and death related in my opinion. Also the only one I have shown to people outside of my bubble.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Wed Sep 10, 2014 7:56 am

Those are all the poems I have found or that I have so far. I do not doubt that I will have more. I really hope you guys enjoy. And I wouldn't mind meeting some other writers.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Wed Sep 10, 2014 11:36 am

wE fAde agAinst tHe dArkneSS,
LiGhts slOwly siNking aWay,
SlOwly, slOwly,
We sEe thE hiDDen faCes
heAr tHe miSSing vOices
giVe up On wHat oNce wE puRsuEd
A drEam nOt wOrth dReaMing.
Slowly, sLoWly
NiGhtmAres bEcOming
nOt aS scAry anymore.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Wed Sep 10, 2014 5:27 pm

Wow... that's great. Amazing. SmileSmile
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Thu Sep 11, 2014 8:04 am

Shadows live within,
Darkness creates your Halo.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Thu Sep 11, 2014 8:06 am

Silence surrounds me,
Unknown sounds interrupt,
Making me jump.

Shadows swirl around,
Engulfing my soul,
Gripping my spirit.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Thu Sep 11, 2014 11:26 am

I mEan nO hArm aS I sAy thiS, bUt yOur pOems sEEm qUite rEpetItive. ThEy dOn't hAve tO alWays bE abOut dArkneSs, sAdneSs or dEaTh. And yOu cOuld trY uSing a rOmantIc thEme iN yOur pOemS, iT dOesn't mEan wriTing aBout lOve, bUt rAtheR it mEans wriTinG iN a stYle thAt uSes "big" wOrds thAt hAve atHmoSphere iN thEm. Try rEadinG EdgaR AllAn PoE fOr inSpirAtiOn. StArt frOm "ThE RavEn". It'S a cLassiC oNe.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Thu Sep 11, 2014 4:53 pm

Ok, thanks for the tip. I have tried writing about other topics, it just doesn't work. The words silence, darkness, and shadows appeal to me a lot. I will take advice though, thanks. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Thu Sep 11, 2014 7:23 pm

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Ok, thanks for the tip. I have tried writing about other topics, it just doesn't work. The words silence, darkness, and shadows appeal to me a lot. I will take advice though, thanks. Smile

whAt abOut wOrds liKe GriM, GrOtesQue, crimSon anD ghOulisH. If yOu reAlly wAnna wrIte hOrrOr-sTyle pOems, tRy uSing sUch wOrds, bEcaUse iF sUcH a cOmmOn thEme rEpeAts tOO ofTen, iT wiLL sOund QuiTe bOriNg. Try thEmes liKe lOss oF a lOve thRough mUrdeR and inSaniTy, bUt wriTe evErythiNg iN aN eeRie, fLowinG anD rOmantIc sTyle. MouRning aNd hAte aRe vEry cOmmOn, sO trY twiStiNg tHem iNtO sOmethIng mOre siNister. AlsO, rhYming iSn't nEcceSSary, bUt pOems hAve tO hAve a cErtaiN fLow.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Fri Sep 12, 2014 2:46 am

Understood.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Fri Sep 12, 2014 4:52 am

Running,
Blurring trees surround,
Adrenaline courses through veins,
Lending strength.

Excitement joins jumbled feelings,
At what lays ahead,
And behind,
Unknown.

Alive and Free.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Fri Sep 12, 2014 11:14 am

wolf wind wrote:
Running,
Blurring trees surround,
Adrenaline courses through veins,
Lending strength.

Excitement joins jumbled feelings,
At what lays ahead,
And behind,
Unknown.

Alive and Free.
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Is this better Question

yOu'rE gEttiNg thEre. GOod wOrk.
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PostSubject: Re: Poems, write, read or show favs.   Fri Sep 12, 2014 5:50 pm

Thank you. I think I imagine that's what would go through a wolf's mind when they are running with the pack. Smile
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