I've read your story so far, and am really enjoying it. I should've seen the thingy in 'Punishment' coming, seeing the name of the chapter. But it still was a surprise, if not a bit of a shock. In a good way, though. The Part I and Part II... I think I see where you're going. Right now I'm wondering if you'll somehow turn it into a happy ending, or if you'll go for the bad ending. I am looking towards reading more of it, either way.