He needs to feed, but he doesn’t want to be seen. He will mesmerize you with his long, slender, arms, lulling you into a deep trance of comfort while at the same time filling you with horror. He can creep into your dreams, completely take over, and never stop until you are to terrified to leave the house, or even close your eyes if fear he will come for you. Come closer to you. He is deviant; playing with his prey like a cat would a mouse. He loves the smell of a lower life forms fear, humans only, since they would do anything just to not lose their pathetic, meaningless, lives. How quickly the blood rushes through their veins. The utter terror in the eyes of a young girl who wants nothing more than to be at home, with her parents again.
So far, that's all I got. It does seem a little weird by my standards, But what do you guys think? Any advice on what to add?